Just started reading the newly published guide.
In the walkthrough overview there is still talk about a second playthrough. Guess you missed that one.
I'll continue reading. If I find more than I'll let you know.
Also in the story walkthrough there is still talk of a second walkthrough.
Found a small typo in the story walkthrough: gatlin
g instead of gatlin
(look for this near Kromm's achievement)
On the dlc-page you could maybe have a small Table of content where you mention the four dlc's.
On the dlc-page I found this: thanks to
https://www.trueachievements.com/Lockerdown3.htmfor this information
If you put a space after "to" and before "for" then the url will clean up nicely to
Lockerdown3In addition to the above I would like to make one more suggestion. There are several small lists in your guide. IMO it looks a bit nicer if you use bulleted lists. (It's easy; select the list you have and press the bullet list button)
Finally I wanted to talk about Weapon Aficionado.
Each time you kill an enemy using a weapon, whatever weapon group it belongs to, your proficiency for using that weapon increases. Use it for long enough and you’ll gain a level in that weapon's stats.
It would be better to say something like: "Every time an enemy gets killed the proficiency of the weapon you're holding increases."
This is especially relevant in co-op. Your proficiency will go up if your co-op partner makes kills.