Doodle Jump for Kinect Walkthrough Discussion

Please use this thread to discuss the Doodle Jump for Kinect walkthrough

The walkthrough has now been published.

You can find it here: Doodle Jump for Kinect Walkthrough

You may want to take out the "bank it" achievement at the top as you have put it a bit further down

I'm sorry but this isn't much of a walkthrough. It's more like you made guides for each achievement and stuck them together. Doesn't walk me through the game whatsoever. Repeated achievement, improper presentation of achievements, and no actual locations for powerups or monsters (which levels they're in). Also, no word on each specific level, you just gloss over the worlds in general. Maybe pointing out where each of the blue coins are in each level would be a start?

The text also suffers from poor grammar and syntax. Its wording is often improper and the walkthrough is overall poorly structured.