For:
It's worth noting that if you miss on your first attempt you can simply pause, restart from last save, and you'll be back in the manager's office. The achievement will still unlock since the failed attempt is not saved.
- (8 of 10) through (10 of 10) are missing for Act 1.
- "cut out" - cutout is one word.
- The section that starts with "Then, after the above achievement, go along the road until you get to a gramophone in the middle of the street." Should be merged with this text: "Go back and to the right side of the building". The wooden breakable is immediately to the left of the gramophone so it's silly to run there, then back, then there and back again.
- The section beginning "So what you want to do is jump onto the lowest horse" is missing (7 of 15) which is on the platform when it says "Shift out, and jump onto the top of the carousel" (before jumping)
- The text "Shift in again at the end and walk across the rope to the other platform. Jump to the next platform and shift in again, and make your way across the shadows again. On the other side, shift out, go down the stairs, and head straight to the interact-able under the umbrella. Interact with the bottle to obtain:" is very confusing for what you need to do. It should also contain a warning NOT to interact with the balloon or it makes
missable.
- The text "After going into the alley directly after the bridge" should be "
Go right down the street directly after the bridge"
- The text: "Once it ends, head from where you are towards the right and past the big red pathway" was rather confusing since you're facing away from the path you need to go towards and there are multiple exits from the area you land in. "Once it ends, head towards the Chiaroscuro sign to your right"
Life, it's funny that way.