punkyliar said:I'd argue that "The Windows 8 Red Stripe title" told you exactly which one it was on about.
No, because at the end of that paragraph you still would have no idea which game is being talking about.
Reading is a linear process. You have to write your sentences in a sequence that makes the idea you are trying to convey comprehensible, without having to back track to re-read what you've already read. This is just not a good way to present information.
This is a very short article so I know I am making way too much of a big deal of it. I was just offering a suggestion to make things a bit more readable, that's all. I think we can all agree that putting "Skulls of the Shogun" in the paragraph or moving it below the quote would make things a little clearer. If anything it wouldn't hurt to do so. At the end of the day though it's no big deal if nothing is changed and the article is kept as is. :)